At last morning I got call from Julia. She said me that it is could outside and she doesn't want to go our club "Veteran". I would like to ask her:" Why did she become member of this club for, if she doesn't visit club?" But I don't ask her about it. Ask me another I don't know why she doesn't go there.So, tastes differ. But now I have to call back Yulia, because I have to inform her about news of our club. If I can't call back her I have to text or e-mail her.
In two weeks we will have many different meetings. Films, concerts and etc. Because holiday in Russia: The day of Soviet Army - it is old name. Now День защитника Отечества.
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OK, Valya, this one is really bad... The question you wanted to ask her WHY not WHO. It totally changed the whole meaning of the sentence. Second thing, if you place you Question word DID you don't have to you verb BECAME, you need to say BECOME. You used 2 Past Tenses in the same sentence - it doesn't work for questions. It is different. I don't think that the word GON'T exists!! :)))) SHE IS NOT GOING? Is what you were trying to say? So, the sentence is total mess. Re-do it. I want to hear correct one, how would you say it?
ОтветитьУдалитьThe rest looks OK. Good job on putting together shorter sentences. It has more sense and looks better, reads better.
Инна, я только что зашла сюда, чтобы исправить свои ошибки некоторые, о которых я вспомнила вечером, но ты мне исправила гораздо больше и это очень хорошо! То что непонятно было, это просто опечатка, но ты всё-таки поняла правильно. Да, я хотела сказать, что она не ходит. Сейчас буду исправлять прямо в тексте...
ОтветитьУдалитьMuch better!! 5+
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks, Inna!
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